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mm-issue 104-original

July 31st, 2004 1 comment

mm给我看的第一篇文章,当时没有用批注修改而是直接跟她说的意见,原汁原味给大家看。

本文573词,不知道她用的多少时间呵。

   

Issue 104

"It is primarily through formal education that a culture tries to perpetuate the ideas it favors and discredit the ideas it fears."

   

The speaker contends that the chief way a culture perpetuates its favored ideas while discredits the fearful ones is though formal education. A glance at history may seem to corroborate this statement; however, there are still cases which compellingly contradict this hasty generalization.

On one hand, personal experience informs me that since the very birth of formal schooling, it has been widely employed to instill in the youth the common ideas and outlooks valued in a culture. Just like we Chinese students learn in class that modesty is to be valued and thrifty can’t be abandoned; students in the other hemisphere may well be taught by their teacher from time to time that only self-dependence and self-confidence make for success, which lie at the very essence of American culture. In the ancient age before formal education, these valued ideas were mainly handed down from one generation to generation through sagas, legends or even fairy-tales, which were to be replaced by the burgeoning schools for transmitting values. In fact, the original purpose of foundation of schools lies not so much in imparting knowledge as in imparting ideas and values—it is hoped that through the inculcation of teachers, students will absorb all valued principles into their somewhat empty subconscious—and it works. Heroic deeds are extolled, agreed-upon ideas propagated, and valued thoughts perpetuated.

On the other hand, a culture often defends itself from threatening ideas through formal education. Undoubtedly most of these ideas opposed to are vicious and harmful by common standard, and dispelling these ideas formally and openly do serves to implant in students’ mind sound base of morality. For example, probably we have all been admonished by our teacher not to violate the rules and regulations once of twice, or been punished for lying and cheating and all these might well have left an indelible mark on our memory, rendering us to coil at the thought of these ill-practice. However, by discrediting ideas it fears, a culture sometimes in effect stifles new and creative ideal. It is especially true with some relatively conservative cultures. Immediately comes to mind is the abuse of Copernica ’s heliocentric theory, which was dismissed as heterodox and unacceptable. Students were still told that the earth lies the center of the universe and everything incompatible with this concept is plain absurdity. In this way, the ground-breaking but fear-rising idea was spurned out of the Catholic culture for decades, which aptly illustrate how a culture take advantage of education to get rid of ideas which it fear might spell menace to its existence.

At the same time, however, it should be realized that with the ever-growing cultural confluence and openness of society, the positive effect above mentioned have been lessened by a great degree. To embrace the new era, instead of indiscriminate reject of the ideas it fears, many cultures choose to re-examine and re-assess the value of these ideas. Instead of belittling these exotic ideas in their discourse, teachers are most likely to encourage students to make judgment about them on their own, whether to embrace them or not. Indeed, it is the very change of this function of education that marks a more open, free, and democratic society.

As it is said, schools—not the trench, is the frontier of social development. Through education, commonly valued ideas are preserved and threatening ones are discredited. However, with the increasing openness of any culture, it is predictable that attitudes towards those formally feared novel ideas will change for better.   

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dani19-issue 73-revised by mm

July 31st, 2004 2 comments

先乱贴一两篇试试。这是我生平写的第一篇issue,当时只刚看了ets的一点范文,好多都不懂,狂汗~。直接从word里贴过来的,还好,批注也能显示,只不过位置到了页末。括号里红颜色的字是mm的修改意见,也直接拿出来给大家看了,其实我并不是都赞同哈哈。当然有很多是显而易见的错误,如单三人称啊什么的,大的方向上,可能还有跑题或者审题审偏了什么的,大家就别笑我了。

这篇文章,550词,用时大概45分钟,第一次写没有太掐时间。

 

Issue 73

"In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge."

The human society is blessed in that the human mind is gifted both with a good memory for storing knowledge and also[d1]  strong creative thinkingskill full of by employingimagination. Whereas the foundation of most professions and academic fields lay (lie?) on the vast knowledge we have accumulated since ages of old, it is often the seemingly wildest imaginations that innovate the breakthroughs that creates (create) the modern society as we know it.

Therefore, many a time it might seem appropriate to argue that imagination is more important than knowledge to the development of society. Especially so,[d2]  considering that sometimes our knowledge actually seems to work against our creativeness― not (many) centuries ago, wasn’t it the top physicists of the time that declaimed(acclaimed) that space traveling was simply impossible? Wasn’t it they who assured us that it would be materially impossible and(可删) unrealizable to send anything out of the Earth’s atmosphere? Yet in the past century we have witnessed Sputnik and its various descendants joyfully orbiting in space; we have also heard Armstrong’s famous words on the moon: “one small step for me, one big step for man.” In the light of this example, it would seem that, without imagination, wouldn’t we be confined in our already acquired knowledge, like prisoners in a cell?[d3]  Imagination is indeed the main productive force in most professions and especially the academic fields!

But let’s examine this example further. True, it is wonderful imagination that started the process; but imagination only alonedoes(could)not get a man on the moon. To fulfill the dream,(删去) conjured(up) by our imaginations, we must return to, and rely on our accurate and precise knowledge. In the case of exploring space, we must first calculate and analyze in terms of physics the possibilities and ways of overcoming the Earth’s gravity, not to mention how we intend(devise every possible strategy) to get it back down here(to earth) after its adventure; on the basis of this we then turn to our industrial knowledge to build a prototype; then comes the experimental phase, and if all goes well, we try it out for real. In every phase of this aforementioned process, it is profound knowledge that paves the way.

Therefore we can conclude that imagination and knowledge works in a curious fashion. To tackle a problem, whether industry or academic, various imaginations are first given; they are then analyzed and examined,(by) using our knowledge, to see which of those ideas is (are) feasible (after all, not all of our imaginations are really fruitive and rewarding); after the big(leading) direction has been chosen, it is again our knowledge that we consult (that help to produce)to come up with the detailed blueprint. And often in (deciding and refining) the details we again go through this(the) process of creativeness(creation). Thus it is really unjustifiable to declare between imagination and knowledge, which outweighs which,[d4]  and which is “more important”.

[d5] In most professions and academic fields, we do not rely solely on either imagination or knowledge, but rather a combined force of the two, as I have expressed in the last paragraph. Imagination is the force that showshows us the direction to a beautiful place; knowledge is what actually gets us there,(as it is) our means of transportation. Therefore, they are of equal importance, and we should both cultivate our imagination and accumulate knowledge if we strive desirefor success in any profession or academic field.


 [d1]可删

 [d2]Indeed, considering some historical evidence, it seems that …

 [d3]用问句感觉怪怪的

还应该对例子加点分析

 [d4]to declare either imagination or knowledge outweighs the other, or either one is “more important”

 [d5]应该加个总结标志吧

 

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我和mm的gre写作――预告篇

July 31st, 2004 9 comments

    认识mm,倒有一定的原因是要归功于gre写作的。我俩都很快要考了,这些天也正忙着写(尤其是我,还有十来天了,issue只写过4篇,argument更是仅一篇,太托大了)。写完了互相改,倒也改得不亦乐乎,本来嘛,互相帮助就是一种幸福。

    虽然mm抗议,但我还是跟人说她英语比我好。虽然说这是一个hasty conclusion,但是我想我的argument还是有些站的住脚的地方的――没有金山词霸的话,我是断然看不懂她的文章的。(嗯请就此写一篇argument,投到dani19@tom.com即可哈哈。)

    前些天别的日志里,suiyecc这个不安分的家伙嚷嚷着要我贴作文。想了想,倒也是,独乐乐不如众乐乐(是这么回事吧,ft语文就快忘光了),不过还是等到十几号我俩都考完之后吧。到时候想必壮观,一口气可以贴他个一二十篇的。就是有些细节还没太想好,譬如是单贴原文呢,还是把互相的修改意见也贴出来(如果贴,要怎么贴,因为是用word的批注互相修改的,一会儿不妨试一下)。

    其实这样预告来吊大家胃口也不好。期望越大,失望越大,先跟大家讲好了,我们的文字可是敝帚自珍型的,再说都是gre菜鸟,要是拿出来,让哪位gre大牛笑了,那还望指点一二,或者您当我们本来就是博您一笑也好,呵呵,快快乐乐就是我们的目标。

    最后声明一下,本栏目下的所有文章,均为我和mm的原创,多少也是我们辛勤汗水的成果,未经授权谢绝转载及其它使用。

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ft,荨麻疹!part 2

July 29th, 2004 28 comments

    前天不幸地成为了据说占全体15%~20%的一个人群,而后昨天早上在老妈的果断指挥领导下参观了著名的校医院。

    药也吃了,这病却要跟我开玩笑。白天的时候只是腿上还有风团;晚上边吃饭边看日本-伊朗这场臭球,可能被厅里马力强劲的空调吹到了,突然全身都有了反应。赶紧遵照老妈的建议,去洗了个温水澡(不能热水),果然退去了一些。于是缩到自己房间里,也不敢开空调了,跟人一边qq一边看《你丫闭嘴》,调节一下心情。

    这片子倒是满搞笑的(回头写点文字吧),可是老妈出去散步回来一看我,惊呼病症又严重了,自己赶忙去照镜子,可不是么,就连原本最后一方净土的脸都红的不成了。啊呀气煞我也,本来就不够帅这下更没前途了。

    于是看完了《你丫闭嘴》,决定对自己说“你丫睡觉”。昨夜雨很大,倒是凉快,否则习惯了开空调盖被子的我可能又要不爽了。

    今早5点醒来,自觉着情况好多了,手摸摸,倒也摸不出个所以然来,不敢去照镜子免得打击自己,躺在床上心想这病来的真不是时候。如此迷迷糊糊地到了6点,终于爬起来看了一下,果然好多了,昨晚的恐怖如今只是噩梦一场。脸恢复了往昔的样子,哦,顺眼多了。只是胳膊上又起来了一些。看来真要周游全身才可罢休啊。

    还是没完全好,只好还呆在家里,间或写篇gre作文,唉,无聊。

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惊闻同学的助教英年早逝

July 28th, 2004 No comments

    我不想煽情。这位学长我也没有见过。只是突然觉得,人生无常。

    同学的文章:走好,我的助教!

    下面是水木上的帖子。

发信人: sinbasinba (小狮子,珍惜未名湖和昆玉河的日子), 信区: PhD
标  题: zt今晨一清华博士默默离去
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Tue Jul 27 10:13:05 2004), 站内

作者:cpjlly   转自: 搜狐校园论坛   
  
    
  七月20日,北京。雨很大,应该说是非常大,似乎是在为一个年轻清华博士生离去而哭泣,伤心的不止是他年迈多病的父亲母亲,老天似乎也为此而抱不平,毕竟26岁的年轻生命,一个清华优秀学子,就这样永远的离开了这个美好的世界。 

  
  请你不要怀疑事情的真实性,我虽然不是清华学子,也不是什么名牌大学学生,更不是作家名角,我只想告诉大家,一个努力优秀的学生如何突然离去和带给我们什么样的思考。 

  他是那么的优秀,甚至是完美,185cm的身高,清秀的脸庞,浓厚的眉毛,他的成绩也是那么优秀,高中是在北京四中度过,而后考入了最优秀的学府――清华大学,现在正在读博士的他离毕业还有两年,而他却走了,永远的走了。他身体并不强壮,看起来甚至有些虚弱,可以认为是文弱书生,但却没有任何疾病,而他却在今晨走了,医生说是心脏猝死,但有一点可以证实的,就是他非常努力的学习,平时按照他父亲说的,他除去偶尔娱乐一下平时几乎都是用来学习。去他的卧室充分验证了这一点,一个并不很宽大的书柜挤满了各种用过的书籍,有离散数学、英文原版计算机图书、几本毛泽东诗词以及一本“邓稼先”。书柜对面是他的写字台,上面凌乱的摆放着不多的书和一台JVC的录音机,正中摆放着昨晚翻阅过的一本厚重的C#,封面人物想必就是该书的作者,一个胖大壮硕的西方人,他开心的向你微笑。写字台右边是一张单人床,上面凌乱的放着一个毛巾被以及一个抢救用的很小的管子,断裂的,细细的,平静的躺在那里。门口边衣柜上摆放着一个陈旧的录音机,虽布满灰尘但可以想象它曾经的汗马功劳。在他的房间里唯一的有关娱乐的东西只是一套评书联播磁带。 

  他的父亲表面上并没有表现出太多的痛苦,而是一直在忙前忙后的料理后事,消瘦的背影显现出一丝的坚强,但当他不经意间误将坐在沙发上的侄子当作自己儿子的时候,他略红的眼中流露出一丝的无奈和伤感,但更多的是默默的承受。 

  有人说母亲是最伟大的,她们养育了我们,给了我们生命,抚育我们成长,他们希望我们成才,更希望我们成功。他的母亲躺在床上,不停的重复一句话:“都是我的错,是我要求的太高了…”因为从小他母亲就问他:“将来你做什么啊?”答道:“上清华!” 

  是过多的期望让他喘不过气来?还是太多的竞争压力?还是别的什么导致了他的离去?没人知道,这只让我想起了数学家张广厚。 

  我不知道这算不算英年早逝,但无论对于一个国家一个民族还是一个家庭这都是一个损失。我不知道当今这个物欲横流浮躁的年代踏实进取的还有几人,但我知道有太多的家长希望自己孩子能够成功,又有太多的孩子希望自己考上名牌大学。但当我们强调刻苦努力的时候想到过身体心理健康吗?当我们片面强调刻苦学习的时候考虑过什么样的坐姿是最科学的吗?什么时候学习是最有效率的吗?其实无论是书店还是图书馆都有相关的介绍和研究,我们真正的研究思考过的又有几个人?我们真正树立起健康的意识了吗? 

  如果您是家长,请您通过此文重视起孩子的身体心理健康,如果你是学生请不要拿自己的性命做赌注,因为,如果生命失去了,什么都没了,哪怕你学了再多的知识,考取了再高的学位,生命没了,什么都没了。

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ft,荨麻疹!

July 28th, 2004 19 comments

    昨天真是悲喜交加的一天,有一件让我高兴的要疯掉了的事;我却还得了荨麻疹。

    不知道怎么过敏的。我这辈子就没有过敏过好像,昨天却突然来了,身上皮肤变的红红的,自己都不敢照镜子。晚上吃了片药,好了很多;睡了一觉起来却发现腿上又来了,于是去校医院。

    还真是凑巧。大夫阿姨就是我同学的妈妈,于是过程便很轻松愉快。因为是生平头一次过敏(兼入学两年头一次到校医院就诊,身体一向很好呵),所以阿姨只给我开了点药。回到家里,腿还是隐隐发麻,有挠的冲动,但还是要忍住,嗯。

    不过这荨麻疹来的真不是时候,唉。

   

附:google来的一篇医学文字。

荨麻疹俗称“风疹快”,是由于皮肤、粘膜小血管扩张及渗透性增加而出现的一种局限性水肿反应。有15%~20%的人一生中至少发作过一次荨麻疹。 (原来我是这15%~20%了)

[主要临床表现]

    皮肤瘙痒,随即出现风团,呈鲜红、苍白或皮肤色,少数病例亦有水肿性红斑。部分患者可伴有恶心、呕吐、头痛、头胀腹泻等。急性变态反应,有时可伴有休克的症状。(我只是皮肤有反应,恶心什么的都没有,还好)

[治疗原则]

1. 去除病因。

2. 抗组织胺药物。

3. 降低血管通透性的药物。

4. 局部涂洗剂霜剂止痒。

[护理重点]

1. 按皮肤科一般常规护理。2. 对急性及血管神经性水肿患者者,严密观察生命体征。

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看见朋友们陆续都有blog了,高兴。

July 27th, 2004 6 comments

    作为我的一个小圈子里率先玩起blog的人,很高兴看见哥们们的blog也都陆续搞起来了。

    先是suiyecc。这个家伙可真可气,申请了个blog后,常年只有两篇文章;我倒是一早就把他加到我的友情链接里了。留言里骂他,他也不理。还好,最近他开始blog了,文章质量还很好,青海行的连载,比我的好看多了,妙趣横生啊。嗯,你要赶紧写,尤其要大写你和ct的宿舍生活(我们要8g, 8g!),才对得起我这个忠实的读者。不过不要再搞自己把自己re上热门话题这种动作啦,虽然说是实验吧哈哈。

    然后便是ahyuyu。这个常年被我号召来我blog捧场的家伙终于来了,还一下子就喜欢上了blog。这不,自己就开始发挥了么。居然是写小说,而且是言情啊,我可要少见多怪一回了。且看他下面怎样发展吧。

    。。。。。。

    哈哈。其实特别高兴自己现在能给别人做广告了。也算是打破了自己的一个规矩了,变相开始推荐别人的文章了。(倒不是不屑于推荐别人的文章,别人比我写的好的多的文章多如牛毛,只是害怕开了这个头就会发展成为必然顺带推荐自己的文章呵。That I definitely do not want to do.)

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A Picture of the Trophies

July 25th, 2004 7 comments

trophies

Not bad for a week’s work, huh?

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My Opening Statement in the Debate

July 25th, 2004 1 comment

    Our topic as the Against side: College students should not do part-time jobs. After the first debater of the For side made his speech, I made the following statement. Yeah I know it’s very cheesy and illogical and lacks profound reasoning (so do have a good laugh over it), but this is what contributed to our success, hehe.

    Ladies and Gentlemen, Honourable Judges, Dear Opponents: I’d like to open my statement by saying that we disagree with the For side’s argument. In our view, college students should not do part-time jobs.

    The For side has just made a strenuous effort to show the benefits of doing part-time jobs; they have, however, chosen to neglect the negative aspects involved. Now please allow me to show you the other side of the coin.

    There are three points that I’d like to make:

    Firstly, as college students, our number one priority is our college studies. Doing part-time jobs, however, often conflict with this higher interest―― not only do they consume our valuable time and energy, but most importantly, they also divert our attention from what we should be focusing on: our studies.

    Secondly, it must be pointed out that the overall quality of the part-time jobs offered to us college students is quite low. It is truly sad to say―― yet I must say so―― that in most of the cases we are only used as cheap labour. The undeniable fact is, since we’re still in college, and our future careers are very much undetermined, most companies will not be interested in recruiting us and really help us develop our potentials―― instead, they’re only looking for the cheap labour that we can offer them as of now. Hence there is really little to gain from doing part-time jobs.

    Thirdly, most college students (perhaps including me), are very much unaware of the risks and hazards involved in all those part-time jobs floating around us. In the simplest cases, naive students have been cheated of their money; in some instances students have been tricked into doing illegal activities; and sometimes female students’ rights have even been violated.

    In order to reach the correct conclusion on any subject, it is imperative that we compare the pros and the cons, and see which outweighs which. In our case, as I have just shown you, it is clear to see that the negative aspects are much more dominant. And this is why our conclusion is: college students should not do part-time jobs. Thank you.

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夏令营归来・给cs mm过生日

July 25th, 2004 2 comments

    突然发现自己的blog已经连续7篇都是英文。不行,要写点中文的。

    从黑龙江参加完夏令营回来,沉甸甸的包裹实在是打击了我喜悦的心情。虽说这次大大的露了把脸,是整个夏令营拿奖最多的家伙,可是那四个水晶奖杯也实在沉了点啊……

    同去的计算机系女生(下称为cs mm,嗯,cs for computer science not counter-strike la)收获也颇丰,抱回了三个奖杯,也都是最高级别的(演讲一等奖,辩论赛团体一等奖,最佳辩论队奖)。她只比我少一个十佳辩手的奖;不过演讲的时候她分比我高,排在第三(我第六,前15都是一等奖),也算是跟我打平了。能为校、为京争光,倒的确是很爽的事情。

    不知道是不是有点傲慢自大,不过参加夏令营的时候便想,北京高校的英语水平,一定是全国最高的,这次可不能在我们这儿丢脸。演讲比赛给我泼了盆冷水,虽说十五个一等奖北京占了四个,可是前两名都不是北京学生啊!算了算了,既然奖项同级别,貌似没有丢脸。可是辩论赛是有一个最高奖项的――最佳团队,这可是独一无二的。心里暗暗叫劲,拿定了!

    带队老师没有给我们太多压力。虽说只有三个辩手参加比赛,但是我们的良好准备是靠大家一起努力实现的。(呵,倒记得那个晚上,我一个男生和十个女生以及女老师在一块儿准备辩论赛,多少觉得有点怪怪的。)比赛那天,其实都有点紧张,我开篇陈词便没有能够达到自己预定的水准,而俺校友cs mm的总结也是有些不顺(于是后来向我无数次反省自责),但我们的整体表现依然可算是最好的(后面还有几组实力相当的队伍,可惜在相互激烈的较量中虽然有很多精彩发挥但同时也出现了太多失误)。

   

    嗯,今天于是兴高采烈地坐火车回来。恰巧今天还是cs mm隆重的20岁生日,the end of teen-age啊,太重要了,我们两个和她在一块儿的清华男生(另一个还是她同门师兄,计算机系大牛啊)要是不表现一下太没有水准了。于是几个人约出来一块儿吃饭,也实在是饿极了,在火车上一天都没怎么吃东西。时候已晚(晚上十点了),蛋糕恐怕来不及定做了,便往南门外骑,找到了一家餐馆。

    总算吃了顿饱餐(当然大家还给她唱了happy birthday喽),慢慢悠悠往学校里溜达。到了宿舍,师兄突然掏出了在夏令营结识的东北好兄弟帮着准备的礼物,送给了cs mm。好。虽然这个生日形式过的简陋了些,但是一定有很多可回味的。嗯,我都替她高兴呵。

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